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  1.  

    vry nice..........

  2. Abhishek shukla (Registered Member)
     

    @Gian chand sharma sharma
    प्रणाम गुरु जी ,
    ये आप की महानता है की आप ने मेरे कविता के भाव पक्ष , को समझा , आप के अनुभव मुझसे अधिक हैं , आप ने दुनिया देखा है और मैंने अभी तक जीवन के कुछ एक दशाओं को देखा है, मुझे सीखना है साहित्य , यदि माँ , एवं गुरुजनों की रही तो मैं अपने गंतव्य तक पहुँच जाऊँगा .
    मैंने जो कुछ भी लिखा है, उसकी अनुभूति मुझे हुई है , दुःख है इन विषम परिस्थितियों का , इन्हें दूर करना चाहता हूँ , कठिन डगर है किन्तु असंभव नहीं ...आगे विधि की इच्छा

  3.  

    abhishek ji ---namshkar
    mai ak retired hindi teacher hu !1978me punjab ke kapurthala distt se apna teaching carrir shuru kiya tha or 2012 me himachal ke ah high school se retire huaa hun .is trh mera teaching experince 35 sal banta hai .
    mai apko vishwas dilata hun shudh sahityak rachna hai or iski theme natonal levl ki hai . 35 varshon me khoob kavitaye bachon ko padhie hai naari samsyaa ko laker khoob likha ja chuka hai .... apka pryaas bhi rashtrya satar ka hai . aise topic par khoob likho .... yeh ak samajik samsyaa hai is par kisi bhi trh ki rachnaa ka apna alg hi prbhav hota hai ..dil khol kar likha karo . aap me writting skill achhi nzr aati hai ..... thanks

  4. Ronak brahmbhatt (Registered Member)
     

    its k
    sabko ye hi example dena padta hai mujhe apne name k liye
    but i love my name...... no matter what others think....
    koi baat nai kafi log confuse hote hai vese.....

  5. Abhishek shukla (Registered Member)
     

    @Gian chand sharma sharma
    ji hum ake abhari hain apne ise usi tarah samjha jaisa ki main kahna chahta tha.
    ise paschatya ka prabhav kahen ya bharat ka durbhagya ki vartman samaya me aisi paristhitiyan uttpann ho rahi hain, rishton ki koi ahmiyat hi nahi.jinse humara astitva hai yadi hum unhe hi dukh de to humare jeevan se kya labh?
    yadi yahi dasha rahi to bharat ka bhvishya khatre me hai...

  6. Abhishek shukla (Registered Member)
     

    @ronak brahmbhatt
    main name se hi confuse tha, fir apne exlain kar diya..thankyou.

  7. Abhishek shukla (Registered Member)
     

    @ronak brahmbhatt
    man liya maine

  8. Ronak brahmbhatt (Registered Member)
     

    hahaha mera name sahi hai.....

  9. Ronak brahmbhatt (Registered Member)
     

    koi baat nai
    par sab sochte hai "ronak" ladko ka hi name ho sakta hai par real me "ronak" grammatically female gender hai
    for eg....
    'ghar me ronak chha gai"
    ronak chha gaya nai aayega.
    to.....

  10.  

    shukla ji -----"naari" poem ko padh kar alg saa ahssas huaa .---"jab mera janmaa beta hi mujhe apshabd kahta hai ..." yaha aakr topathk k ander emotin ka sagr jaise thathe marne lag jata hai . aapki kavita behad paripakv aour wzndar hai ... adhunik sandrbho ka parda fas karti hai .hidi jagt ko anoothi rachna dene k liye ap badhaiee k pater hai ..... thanks and regaed .!

  11. Abhishek shukla (Registered Member)
     

    @ronak brahmbhatt
    sorry.....bina profile read kiye reply kiya....

  12. Ronak brahmbhatt (Registered Member)
     

    please read my info on my profile.

  13. Ronak brahmbhatt (Registered Member)
     

    please read my profile
    mera name ronak hai and me " sir " nai hu.......

  14. Abhishek shukla (Registered Member)
     

    @ronak brahmbhatt
    thanks sir. for appreciating my feeling.

  15. Ronak brahmbhatt (Registered Member)
     

    there is a deep feeling in ur poem
    though it have no rhyming still its truly written from heart
    nice poem.

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