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Tweety Meri Jaan Hai (Part-2)

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10 -Sep-2013 Priyanka Daughter Poems 6 Comments  2,835 Views
Priyanka

Tweety meri jan hai. Yeh meri pahchan hai.
Chha jaye is dunia men, Yeh mera arman hai.
Gore gore gal gulabi, Kanchan jaisi kaya.
Chanda jaisa sunder mukhara,Rub ne khub banaya.
Hirni jaisi chanchal aakhen,
Gudia si muskati.
Mujhe dekh kar hath badhati, Godi men aa jati.

Bal sunhare resham jaise, Jab mukhre per aate,
Pariyon ki shahjadi jaisa, Usaka roop sajate.
Ghar men bor akeli hoti, Bahar khush ho jati.
Usaki khushi dekh kar Usamein, Apana bachapan pati.


(Thanks to Dr. Parshuram Shukla for improving this poem.)

Tweety Meri Jaan Hai (Part-2)


ट्वीटी मेरी जान है (भाग- २)

ट्वीटी मेरी जान है. यह मेरी पहचान है.
छा जाये इस दुनिया में, यह मेरा अरमान है.
गोरे गोर गाल गुलाबी, कंचन जैसी काया.
चंदा जैसा सुन्दर मुखड़ा, रब ने खूब बनाया.
हिरनी जैसी चंचल आखें, गुड़िया सी मुस्काती.
मुझे देख कर हाथ बढाती, गोदी में आ जाती.

बाल सुनहरे रेशम जैसे, जब मुखड़े पर आते,
परियों की शहजादी जैसा, उसका रूप सजाते.
घर में बोर अकेली होती, बाहर खुश हो जाती.
उसकी ख़ुशी देख कर उसमें, अपना बचपन पाती.


Dedicated to
My Daughter Mansi (Tweety)

Dedication Summary
Main apni beti Tweety ko bahut pyar karti hun.
Maine is kavita ka PART -1 apni beti ko dekh kar likha tha.

Lekin baad mein DR. PARSHURAM SHUKLA ji ne is kavita mein sudhaar karke ise taraash kar hire ki tarah aur sundar bana diya.

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  • Priyanka Gaun
    Priyanka Gaun (Registered Member)
    Commented on 12-February-2016

    @Harjeet Nishad
    Thank you Harjeet ji.

  • Harjeet Nishad
    Harjeet Nishad (Registered Member)
    Commented on 31-July-2015

    Nice poem..

  • Priyanka Gaun
    Priyanka Gaun (Registered Member)
    Commented on 07-April-2014

    @parshurm shukla
    OK sir,

    I will try and let you know after completing it.

    I will try to write on Birthday.

    Thanks for your motivation..

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    Parshurm shukla (Guest)
    Commented on 07-April-2014

    please try to write one more poem ..

  • Priyanka Gaun
    Priyanka Gaun (Registered Member)
    Commented on 29-September-2013

    @parshuram Shukla
    I have updated.
    Thanks..

  • poemocean logo
    Parshuram Shukla (Guest)
    Commented on 29-September-2013

    Please write gudia in place of dudhia in 5th line ..

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