बहुत सुंदर .

Commented for: Bas Tumse Pyar Kiya Hai

वाह अभिवृत जी .....
नारी की वेदना को एक लेखक ही समझ सकता है ...धन्य हैं आप.

Commented for: He chandr ! gagan mein aa jaao

अदभुत एवं अनुपम रचना है अभिवृत जी ...पहली बार किसी की रचनाएँ इतनी अच्छी लगीं है ..आप दिनकर एवं मैथलीशरण गुप्त की श्रेणी के है ...
कृपया सदा लिखते रहें.

Commented for: Ran Nishchit Ho to Darna Kaisa

Nice poem sir...

Commented for: Samajh Na Paye Aap Mujhe

janaab ek dum dil ko choo gai hai ye kavita. It seeems to be dedicated to every lover. Keep writing Sir ji..........

Commented for: Nahi Priy Aisa Bandhan

Har Premi Ki Yahi Dastaan Hai Dost..Jise Bahut Bakhubi ke Saath aapne Likha Hai..Bahut Achha Laga....aapki Kalam Aur Nukila Ho Bas Yahi Mari Shubhkamna Hai...Thanks.

Commented for: Nahi Priy Aisa Bandhan

A few lines for this poem.....
Humein yakeen h tum badal jaoge
aaj nahin toh kal badal jaoge
mudkar aaoge ussi raste par tum
jahan aaj humein chodkar chale jaoge.

Commented for: Shayad tumhe bhi badal de Zamana......

This is really a heart touching poem,
the rhyme of this poem is awesome.........dude well done!!.

Commented for: Nahi Priy Aisa Bandhan

great ......wonderful, really it just flows from your pen...i would say you are the best poet here on this site.
All the best..

Commented for: Aagaaz

Soo nice one....

Commented for: Ashkon ka behana bhi