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Laljee Thakur(haffman)

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Laljee Thakur(haffman)
Laljee Thakur(haffman)
Laljee Thakur(haffman)

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    Suman (Guest)
    Commented on 08-May-2016

    सच में रुला दिया साहब।।.

    Commented for: Bas Maa Hi Roi

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    Suman (Guest)
    Commented on 08-May-2016

    सच में रुला दिया साहब।।.

    Commented for: Bas Maa Hi Roi

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    Rohit (Guest)
    Commented on 26-March-2016

    Hostal ki yade taja ho gyi Laljee bahut achhi kriti.

    Commented for: Hostel

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    Rohit (Guest)
    Commented on 18-March-2016

    Very nice word collection
    Apne hobby ko continue rakhiye jarur kuchh hasil hoga.

    Commented for: Dupatta

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    RK (Registered Member)
    Commented on 16-March-2016

    e-mere dost mujhe mrne k baad jlana mut, kyonki agr mai jul gaya to mere astun me b uski tasbeer sbko njr aayegi,or wo saream bdnam ho jayegi. bhut bariya likhte ho bhai sabh.........

    Commented for: दिल चीर के क्यों दिखाऊ

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    RK (Registered Member)
    Commented on 16-March-2016

    nice.bewafa wo nahi jo hm sochte h,aksr bewafa halat ho jate h.jise ap or hm chahen wo bewafa kaise ho skte h.bs wkt or khuda unhe bewafai krne pr mjboor kr deta h..

    Commented for: दिल चीर के क्यों दिखाऊ

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    Shanu (Guest)
    Commented on 07-March-2016

    ma to ma hai paq bete ko kabhi apna kartavy nahi bhulna chahiye.

    Commented for: Bas Maa Hi Roi

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    Raju jee (Guest)
    Commented on 17-October-2015

    Very good song ......plz keep it.....

    Likho aur likhte raho.....really majedaar hai
    Harlogo ko ek baar kam se kam padhna chahiye mere khyal se......

    Commented for: Aap Ki Raat Ho

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    Pramod kr (Guest)
    Commented on 25-September-2015

    बहुत अच्छी कविता बहुत खूब दोस्त ।मजा आ गया पढ़ कर।.

    Commented for: Wo Hans Deti Thi

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    Kundan (Guest)
    Commented on 21-September-2015

    बहुत अच्छी कविता है ,और इससे हमें अच्छी सिख भी मिलती है।.

    Commented for: Mahaparalay

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